Beginning:
Starts of establishing the fact that there is a girl who has grown up and made many wrong choices that she never thought that she would make seeing as she had such a great upbringing with being in church and having a loving and caring mother. Since she was young a lot has happened including losing her mum which really got to her since she strayed away from her and wasn't there with her in her last minutes.
Middle:
Her and another teenage boy who has more or less done the same thing with his life when it comes to straying away from his parents and making a whole bunch of wrong decisions. Since these two have such a close story they appear as if they are going through the same things and are shown singing in the darkness and also contemplating life in their cars at night. Both teens are full of regret and memories of when they are children follow them like a shadow of how they used to be.
End:
In the end the girl realizes her mistakes and own up to them symbolized by how she is able to go to her mothers grave and finally accept that she is gone the boy serves a way out for her he is like her guide because he has been through the same situation as her but he went through it before her and he made it out so he is helping other people to find a way out of it. It ends with a montage of people growing up and making the mistakes as the two other people.
Hi Levi
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 15/20
What you have for each section of your planning gives an indication of what you guys are planning but is lacking in detail and depth. Planning needed to have a brainstorm and moodpboard (credited to whoever did it) and go into a bit more explanation for the 'why' in your creative choices. It's just hard to mark what isn't there. If you only had a small part of the treatment to do, that was an opportunity to really go all out and explain it well, add in visual elements and put some good work into it.
Not a bad effort, I just know you can do more than this and get those better marks!
T-B